Greats' and Grands' Day Writing.

Hi
This is a recount I wrote about Grandparents' Day. Nana Haywood came and so did Granna Diane.

Greats & grands day

Hi everyone    
Here is a Thinglink that I made for Greats and Grands Day. This is my first time making a Thinglink.

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Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese. I decided to put a photo of my animal on the background of my fishbone diagram and publish it just like that.

Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.

Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano