My first piece of writing for term 1.

My unassisted recount that I did this week. We didn’t get any help from the teacher. We have made copies so that our friends can help  us improve them.

Term 1 2016  Personal Recount Sample                                            Name: Taylor

Title: going to raingboter

Paragraph Plan: 1.going to the beach 2.getting nip by a crab 3.playing in the sand

Start Writing Here: my mum dad and sister and me we went to the breach went we got to the beach we went swiming in the morning and I got net by a crab in the water and I ran on the sand then I playd in the sand and drow in the sand it was fun went I go nep by a crab my tow was sack I have to boll to get it it was not sow at all the we went home and we go a ice crem.