“Yay!!” We were finally going on holiday .We all hopped in the car.The car was as loud as a mooing cow. ”Yay!”I screamed as we got on the plane. “The plane is warm like a blankie”.
We got to Australia and it was hot like a pie.We got the car and went off to the place that we were staying at.
At the end of the holiday we went back to the airport. I said, “ I am a sad puppy.”
We got home and I rushed like a cheetah to my mum.
She said that she was waiting for me to get home. I was happy. I gave her a present from Australia and I gave my dad one too. It was a nice day.
Great job on the similes and metaphors,Taylor. Bet Mum and Dad thought the best present was you coming home.
ReplyDeleteYeah it was but thxs.
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