Kia Ora everyone
This is a writing that my whole class did of how five senses here is the five senses that we had to use smell,sight,hearing,touch and taste I hope you like it.
Tropical beach
The cold breeze whispering in my ear as I walk past the beautiful blue water.
My friends and I can see the palm trees waving.
I taste the salty water rising into my mouth as I say yuck.
I'm feeling the golden sand as I lay gently above it.
We smelt the salted scent of the water wafting around
my nose.
By Taylor Mackenzie Powdrill
Here is what it is
Kia ora Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI like that you have included friends in your writing - going to a place like this is so much better with friends, don't you think? I also like your use of personification to show the palm trees waving.
Miss M