Easter Writing

Hello,
This week in writing we have been learning about the senses to help the story sound more interesting.
My focus is to work on my full stop's and putting them in the right place.                  
I enjoyed the ending of the story.         
I learnt to have a hook in my writing, the purpose of having a hook at the start of my writing is to make the audience want to keep reading.
This week I have learnt to check for missing words.

My Recount Plan	Name: Taylor Powdrill	Date:30 March 2016
Title Easter

	When At Easter weekend	Who My family and I	Where At home	What Played games and ate Easter eggs	Don’t forget to use your senses.
Paragraph 2	Time words First At the beginning The first thing	What did you do first? In the morning I went to get my chocolate.
		Use adjectives to describe people, places and things. They were crunchy.
Paragraph 3	Time words Next After that Then Later	What happened next? Next I went to the easter egg hunt
		Use a simile. When I open the wrapping they were as brown as dirt
Paragraph 4 Wind up your story	Time words Finally Last At the end	What happened at the end? At the end of the day I went to bed
		How did you feel? I was happy.