Learning Journey

Wednesday, 7 September 2016

ski trip


Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write about how we felt about the ski trip.
Something I think I have done well  is thinking up lots of ideas to write about but
next time I think I could improve using capital letters and fullstops as my teacher found lots missing.

Ka kite ano

Hi Last week, we went skiing for two days. We had to get our skis, poles and boots and have a lesson. I learned how to stop and I was good at skiing. It was fun but  it was hot in the snow. I went so fast and I had to stop and I did a pizza and I nearly crashed. I love skiing.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Taylor my name is Hurileigh from Tautoro school and I am a year six in room 5. This is a nice pice of writing. Keep up the good writing. :)

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