Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write about how we felt about the ski trip.
Something I think I have done well is thinking up lots of ideas to write about but
next time I think I could improve using capital letters and fullstops as my teacher found lots missing.
Ka kite ano
Hi Last week, we went skiing for two days. We had to get our skis, poles and boots and have a lesson. I learned how to stop and I was good at skiing. It was fun but it was hot in the snow. I went so fast and I had to stop and I did a pizza and I nearly crashed. I love skiing.
Kia ora Taylor my name is Hurileigh from Tautoro school and I am a year six in room 5. This is a nice pice of writing. Keep up the good writing. :)
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